Forever Bleeding Out

I wrote this with anger.

My heart is breaking,
my mind is aching
The tears drain out,
as my body is shaking

The music is blaring,
the sun is still flaring
I put back together,
my life that you're tearing

You seem so uncaring,
there's nothing you're sharing
I can't let you near,
this heart I'm repairing

I follow, you're leading
Your thoughts I'm misreading
I see someone else,
down this path you're proceeding

This anger I'm constraining,
my mind is obtaining
In this state I'm remaining,
forever bleeding out

Reviews

[D S Rollins]

Flow is amazing. The words pour out with emotion. This is nice.

[Moflo]

Excellent rhymes and perfect flow, also a perfect display of emotion. Very nice poem, I liked it a lot.