His Heavenly Heart

Wrote this in dedication of someone I really liked.

I see who you are
when you look in my eyes,
your color is vibrant
in the darkest of skies

A heart so pure,
it shines in the light
In the heat of the day,
till it turns into night

A soul that’s complete,
so peaceful and still
like a vacant green meadow
or a wide grassy hill

Eyes that weaken
my body and soul,
and fill me with emotions
I cant quite control

Everything about him,
I keep inside
so the beauty within him,
he can not confide

Reviews

[D S Rollins]

Amazing flow. Lovely word use. Keep it up!

[Moflo]

Great poem. Excellent rhymes and flow. Good job.