My Only Fear

I let him in, he let me down. He lied when he said he loved me.

My eyes turn blue,
they drip the blood
The pressure follows,
I drown the flood

I bring you closer,
I draw you in
I let out the water,
I’ve held within

I break into pieces,
I start to decay
I’m going down slowly,
I’m floating away

You’re bringing me closer,
I start to spin
The pressure keeps rising,
the water seeps in

Scared and helpless,
I start to let go
The waters torture,
Is rising below

Whirlpool keeps spinning,
over my head
Sinking down slowly,
the water turns red

Breaking on the inside,
and bleeding on the out
Come back and save me,
from the love I’m without

Lay me down slowly,
and bury my pain
Leave me with something,
my soul will obtain

Show me the light,
and fade out the dark
Set me a path,
I have to embark

Leave me with something,
and carry my heart
Take me beside you,
so our paths never part

Reviews

[prim]

i love the way you rhymed this, and i think it's beautiful (like all of your other work :) this reminds me a lot of struggles that i've been through, and it's nice (and sad) to know that i'm not the only one who's been treated this way. keep up the great work, and your readers are on your side :)