Pretty

A pretty girl put up with a man she thought she loved because she lost her virginity to him. Then she realized that she needs to love herself first before trying to give herself to someone.

perfect angel, pretty, pure
loved someone for that I'm sure
pretty promptly pampered him
put up with the lie she's in

tells herself that she's okay,
she can not make this go away
pretty pushed herself inside,
many tears that she has cried
plastic person loving him,
his cruel game she can not win

Pretty piled heavy bricks,
burdens from the man shes with
so much pressure piled high
shocking how she's getting by
pretty lives her life for him,
so much that her lights gone dim

herself glowing, gone for good
until he treats her like he should
treat yourself as he should treat,
and your self love is then complete

Author's Note

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Reviews

[prim]

this is beautiful, and i really felt a connection with it. thank you so much for posting this! it was very touching and sad, and i loved it! keep up the good work!

[Rendawg]

anouther great peice youll be famous one day if you keep this up

[Rozu]

i enjoyed reading this a lot. has a good message and can probably connect to a lot of people. nice work.

[Alexander Loux]

This is beautiful. very wonderful. I love the rhythm of it. Your word usage is very good and it's a very wonderful peice of writing. it leaves me wondering if the writer is ok. I hope the nararator is ok. I look forward to reading more from you!