Under the Water

I want to live under the water because above the water there is so much destruction and pollution of the earth that it makes me sad. Under the water I don't have to see what we've done to the world.

Under the water,

where I go to hide

The sadness approaches,

 the joy has died

 

Colder and colder,

the water turns black

The earth that surrounds it,

Is beginning to crack

 

There is fire and chaos

and smoke all around,

yet under the water

there’s nothing, no sound

 

I go to the surface,

the site is so rare

I breathe in the smoke,

that poisons the air

 

Under the water,

where I go to hide

all that surrounds me,

are the tears I have cried

Filled to the rim,

there’s nothing but pain

here in this water

is where ill remain

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Reviews

[Rendawg]

i love it dang one of the best things ive read so far
so much potintail cant wait to read more keep up the great work

[Alexis]

this is very lovely. i love how show either yourself or someone else going deep into the ocean, and even though you're in the ocean you're still sad about everything going on above. this is a wonderful piece, good job:D