Bottled Destruction

After putting up with the same negative stuff for awhile, I got fed up and the pain enclosed all around me until I felt like I was going to explode.

My life has turned off,
I’ve fallen so low
The pain that exceeds me,
is bottled below
So deep in my chest,
that my body will ache,
and shatter among me,
as my bones start to break

I’ve fallen to pieces,
my sobs never cease
The memories are forceful,
and hard to release

Too much destruction,
we've stumbled and crashed
Bleeding before you,
is my body you smashed

Author's Note

Please read and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Rendawg]

left me speechless in a great way i love it

[Alexander Loux]

a lovely poem but makes me want to cry. i used to feel this way so i knwo how much it hurts. you did justice to the emotions. well done