Unwanted Feeling

Stuck in my sadness,
there's nothing to gain
I cry out a river,
to drain out the pain

My flesh is still burning,
yet this feelings so cold,
I lie in the sunlight 

with no one to hold

Within this sadness
Misery remains
And I'm left with this feeling,
I cannot contain

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

A very wonderful write here with a powerful message! Who says we need love in order to belong? Who says we need to fall in love now? It's better to wait until love finds us because then, we will truly know it is real. We can surely be happy without being in love, though many nowadays might not think so. I understand how it feels to not belong, I'm currently in this phase, but it takes time to figure out what we are worth. I love your words and applaude you on this piece :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Really touched my soul. I have been through this phase and i got over such feelings... No need to be in love to feel precious.. you are precious in the sight of God. So be happy for being you.Don't live to impress people but to express yourself. Keep writing friend.


~Sophy

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I really like the rhythm and rhyme in this piece, it flowed smoothly all the way through, in my opinion. I can relate to this feeling when I am sad or alone, but I find that nothing lasts forever, even the sad feelings of being alone. You did a wonderful job in choosing words to bring emotion into the poem.

Great Job