Dying Within

Dying Within

A Poem by GreenSkeleton16

Left me alone,
the same as before
The memories we made,
you chose to ignore

Broken to pieces,
I’m hurting again
Feeling this way,
I’m dying within

Time heals most,
yet its going too slow
Not sure now,
which way I should go

Covered in sadness,
but I’ll keep it inside
To remind myself how,
it felt when you lied

© 2014 GreenSkeleton16


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It's never easy to remember such tragic, heartbreaking memories. But those memories are in the past and will only make us stronger, mold us into better people. It'll teach us that love doesn't always come easily, but that we must learn to fully trust one another in order to build something so strong. Relationships can't always go the way we plan, not alot of them do. But they teach us important life lessons which we will take to our grave. I also love the rhyming you put into your work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The pain of a broken heart.very relatable on this site.you choose your words carefully with raw and honest emotions.
I hope the scar on your heart will heal soon or has already healed


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's never easy to remember such tragic, heartbreaking memories. But those memories are in the past and will only make us stronger, mold us into better people. It'll teach us that love doesn't always come easily, but that we must learn to fully trust one another in order to build something so strong. Relationships can't always go the way we plan, not alot of them do. But they teach us important life lessons which we will take to our grave. I also love the rhyming you put into your work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 7, 2014
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GreenSkeleton16
GreenSkeleton16

Arlington, TX



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My passion is Music. My heart is poetry. My mind is spiritual, and this earth needs love. more..

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