Hollowed Heart

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet

Written 4/28/15 You've gone missing...

Hollow out

My heart

I no longer want to feel

The haunting ghost

Of your missing

Presence

[End]

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet

Author's Note

Drawing by Derek Hess.

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andrew mitchell

A haunting good write , very clever

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks AM. :]

ANTO

Super imagery Ashley - the picture enhances the poem exponentially; though the image of a hollowed out heart *shivers* is pretty graphic enough. Numbness rather than pain, which is worse. At least with pain you are feeling something.
Thank you for all your reviews my friend. :))

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Numbness is usually worse, but I think in this situation I'd rather feel that then what I am feeling.. read more

mattavelli

It looks pretty on the page thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks. :]

Jamestown

Fantastic write!
Love everything about this piece:)
I am going to draw that picture for sure,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks James! Glad you liked it. :]
If you like that picture - check out the artist, his name.. read more

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Hey, I'm Ashley. Here's some random things about me - I was born on Friday the 13th. I have 1 brother and 4 sisters. My family and friends are very important to me. I have two of the greatest best fr.. more..