A Vast Ocean

Written 4/11/15 sereenaoutloud challenged me to write something, it had to be about water so here it is haha.

Your heart
Is like a vast ocean.
At the shoreline
The waves are usually calm.
..Tamed..
But swim further out
Take a dive
And see
The untamed waters; a raging
Deep sea
(End)

Author's Note

Only posting it cause Sereena wanted me too haha.

Reviews

[Chris]

a valid and thoughtful insight.

[GreenEyedPoet]

Thank you. :)

[wordman]

love is like a ocean,some times tame some times not

[GreenEyedPoet]

Very true!

[andrew mitchell]

You sucked me in with the ocean that beckons like love and how deep is love? How long is a piece of string!? A great write and challenged you arose from the deep with many colours. Lovely!GEP

[GreenEyedPoet]

Aww thanks Andrew! Glad you liked it! :)