Deadly Dance

Deadly Dance

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 1/19/15. Dancing with my past.

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My soul is like a grave
I've collected so many skeletons over the years
It's starting to look like a murder scene here
I keep trying to bury them
In a garden under roses
Be careful that you don't get to close
While trying to examine the beauty
Or you might be pricked
A kiss of death comes upon them
And the flowers wilt and die
Scattered bits and pieces
Find their way out
Allowing small glimpses
Into my world
I end up intertwined in a deadly dance
With my skeletons
The dance of past and present
And I'll have this dance with you again
Until the season is ripe
I'll plant you in those flower beds when the time is right
Even if only for a night
(End)

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet


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Great and so true. We have those "skeletons" that pile up if we do not deal with them. i love the imagery again that you create, I can just see the bones pilling up lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

9 Years Ago

Haha it's a big pile, I can tell ya that lol.
This is good poetry. Alive and true words.
"The dance of past and present
And I'll have this dance with you again
Until the season is ripe"
The words are true and the use of the skeletons make it easy to grasp and understand. All of us have a closet filled with skeletons. I tell people. Better to allow the things dead put away, that can't help or promote. They become just another brick in the wall (pink floyd) for us to become wiser. If we are lucky. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

9 Years Ago

So true!
Thank you for the great review! :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Tags: Skeletons, Past, Present, Flowers, Roses, Kiss of Death

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