The Music

Written 2/18/06

Look deep inside me
Tell me what you see
On the outside
I fake being happy
But am I really?
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Hear the music?
The melody that plays in my head?
Over and over
That's the beat I go by
Again and again
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Tell me
Is this soul worth saving?
Ever to be renewed?
Broken and tainted
Unclean forever
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Can you see all the anguish I hold?
Do you understand my fears?
Being indicted for something I have not done
Inaudible to all
Knowing I'm unintelligible to many
(End)

Reviews

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no one can hear the music in our heads... and they only see what we show them... music can alter moods or describe them... I wonder which melodies are playing now? Great write, Ashley!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Oh gosh I forgot I even had some of my super old poems on here, they are so terrible! I cringe reading them lol.
But thank you for checking the poem out FT! :]

[sereenaoutloud]

Lol Ashley .. We think alike I just said the same thing about a review of an older poem... That's a good thing if we think that ... It means we have grown as writers!! This is really good though so no need to cringe at all! :)

[GreenEyedPoet]

I never say I'm a good writer but I can admit that I'm better then I was when I started years ago. I guess all those years of not doing was actually a good thing for me lol. I really only uploaded some of the older pieces just to give people an idea of how I progressed lol.
But thanks girlie! :]