Hidden Middle Finger

please review and let me know what you thought of it That would be great I wrote this when I was very angry, it willbe interesting to see if anyone relates

Hidden Middle Finger

 

Most see red

I saw white

scolding hot and brilliant

Staining the crisp colour of the world

blinding me

Throat laden with a choke hold of self restrain

Barely retained

Eyes trained

straight ahead

To the watchers dead

But behind the glass surface

Raging turmoil

My grey orbs accusing and challenging

Only hooked brow reveals my distaste

Crush my palms with haste

Skin made ashen through force

I dare not make breath

For fear of breathing words

Lungs seething and burning

All the while yearning

To flick the long strong finger

Numerously to be sure

Yet I wait

For the verbal onslaught to cease

Then mutter silent abuse to the floor

I'm red with hate

Their back turns to retreat

And I proudly flip the finger

In silently harsh repeats.

 

 

 

 

 

 

    

 

Reviews

[ANTO]

Wow - the dead eyes reminded me of the great white just before it attacks - magical imagery
The great white wishes it could flip the bird and with so much panache too - instant 'lol classic'
thanks for the laughs :DD

[Ann Daniels]

haha glad you enjoyed it
Thanks for the review :)