Damage

I do wonder

if that was just

another thing

that burned

or if it

fell victim

to some other

catastrophe 

Reviews

[Sk. Kamarul Islam]

Short but thought provoking, let's overcome the shock.

[LEAVEMEALONE]

It made me wonder how should I proceed to heal from the damage. Very nicely penned.

[MsJewel]

Well written and powerful words. Very nice :) Julie

[Re-Pete]

either way the damage is done.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Lol this write made me think of money lol I've been fools who because of so wealthy they would burn money because they had it. I cried because of the catastrophes.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the catastrophes of the heart...and we, the victims.
Power in a short span here.
j.

[Arundass TP]

Nicely written poem. Enjoyed reading. Loved this shortie

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Excellent.

[Zombified Spider]

It's short, but it gets the message across very well. It's opens up questions and leaves me questioning my existence (something I do already).

[Soren]

Short and to the point yet still vegan enough to provoke thought. And what was it that burned or what other catastrophe befell it? I found this poem quite intriguing nicely done.