Damage

I do wonder

if that was just

another thing

that burned

or if it

fell victim

to some other

catastrophe 

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Nicely written poem. Enjoyed reading. Loved this shortie

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Excellent.

[Zombified Spider]

It's short, but it gets the message across very well. It's opens up questions and leaves me questioning my existence (something I do already).

[Soren]

Short and to the point yet still vegan enough to provoke thought. And what was it that burned or what other catastrophe befell it? I found this poem quite intriguing nicely done.