It’s my world and you just exist in it

I didn’t love you.
I loved the idea of you.
And I rewrote you
into my story
the way I wanted.

Reviews

[Soren]

Short and to the point. This reminds me of 90% of relationships, maybe more. We all have our idea of what a relationshiip should be and without thought for how that fits into another's view we plunge ahead. So well said in so few words

[Franky]

This is jn my opinion brutal honesty. I can relate very well.

[In Em's Wonderland]

Love can most often be a difficult concept...some love the idea of being in love, others thrive on actually living it--most often in romance books I feel the plots can be overrated or repetitive, but every now and then I"ll get a different kind of plot twist worthy of my attention.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Editing life can sometimes get one lost in illusion. Poor Pygmalion, he wanted love so bad he had to sculpt his from cold marble. Cool write, F.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Each author has his or her own truths...and that is what is written.
j.

[D. Mansfield]

Sort and sweet, no doubts in these words. You seem a strong soul, good for you