Still

I still think about you

I know I don’t have

the right

But I said I cared

and whether you realize it 

or not

I consider that a promise

Reviews

[Lilly]

Oh I feel this haha
I think many will too / many can relate to this.
I say keep the promise, but not dwell on it too much, and spend more energy on the here and now.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with the words in the poetry Green. Made promises become part of us. You said a handful in so few words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

There's a woman in me and many more out there who can relate to this. The problem really begins when the feelings are not reciprocated.

[Ballpark Frank]

This is sweet. Someone told me that recently and I didn't believe them. I'm kicking myself a bit.

[Scott Kris]

Oh yes!!! I know so many past relationships who just disappeared. Yet I would welcome them openly back because they never left my heart and thoughts.
Yes, we have no right. It is an indulgence of loving intention.

Beautiful and touching.

Scott.

[Soren]

Being true to yourself is a key to knowing who you are and respecting yourself. Keeping a promise is critical to ones integrity. This is all that you take with you through this life. Well written.

[Chris Shaw]

You can’t stop caring about someone at the click of a finger. This little write speaks to me about a person with a compassionate nature. That is treasure in my opinion.

Chris

[Ciara]

Love is not a promise that is ever broken.
I really like this.

[AYVID N]

I love the way you said it here.
When we care, its a committment even if nothing is explicitly said.
The caring never ceases and that is such a beautiful thing.
An expression of the truest kind.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Aw they should keep their promises too, sad they fail to keep theirs though you are not alone with jilted love. You expressed in a fine articulate way, so appealing. Thumbs up.

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.