What you don't know, can't hurt you

you are a bad liar

oh yeah, how often have you

believed I am fine

Author's Note

I'm trying something new. I don't really do haikus

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Few people want to know us. I watch the eyes. You did well. A meaningful poem that asked a proper question. Very nice use of words.
Coyote

[Ken e Bujold]

ok, good to experiment. give a few helpful thoughts hints how to punch this baby up and make it purr a bit.
start by reassembling the word order.
if me, i'd go...
A bad liar you are:
how often have you, oh yeah,
believed, fine I am.

same words, same thoughts, same beats, whole different experience for the reader, makes them work a little

Ken e

[Lisasview]

Good morning,
Not sure what your three lines are trying to say..Perhaps this is the beginning of a poem?
Lisa, now in Spain