Actually

Actually,
I say quite a lot
just not out loud.
Graphite shear
is a pretty quiet sound,
my hand brushing across the page
is a whisper to hide my yells.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too dear poet. Once I was loud. Now I write to paper. I liked the gentleness of your words. The poetry was meaningful and worthwhile.
Coyote

[JMaster1]

I adore your writing , short poems are my fav
You said so much in so little

[Soren]

A nice piece of work. I enjoyed the image of graphite as a whisper to hide yells. Well done

[...Relic...]

That's what writing is for, to express yourself across the page in whatever way you see fit. This is short, but vivid and real.

[Lisasview]

Oh this is so very good..
Reminds me of a poem I wrote in the early 1970's... I was in my early 20's..
It is called SCREAMS
The last line is
All but the one endless within me...
Really enjoyed your poem.
Lisa. now in Spain

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

No reviews? This is good! It Speaks a powerful message of someone wanting to be heard, but hides their yells instead!