Breathe

It's a moment

Completely missed by everyone

When she slows down

Looks up at the sky

Exhales a puff of visible air

And smiles

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Simple, strong and wonderful use of words. You gave life to the photo. It is good to take a puff of the visible air. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Throwing Romeo]

Dear Kindred poet
Uttering the sigh in words
immortalize the breath
we share.

Well done.
100/100

[Weeping willow]

Sounds like a beautiful moment, sometimes in this life it is hard to just breathe. Beautiful simple write which I can relate to ;-]

[Unspoken poet]

Love this, love the imagery. awesome

[KAREN]

I love it! it's short but is so peaceful to read!