Sky's on fire

I need a better title...

Don’t look now

But the sky’s on fire

I didn’t know things burned in shades of pink

Peeks of blue in between the lazy flares

I thought that was supposed to be

The hottest part of the flame

Fully formed day clouds

Drifting away like the smoke

Don’t look now

But the world's alight

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Muhammad]

Imagery is something I try to infuse into my work as much as I can. Magnificent pieces like this, that utilize it so well, give me so much inspiration.

[Unspoken poet]

I didn’t know things burned in shades of pink
Peeks of blue in between the lazy flares

Love this, love your imagery and picture

[KAREN]

This poem had lovely imagery!

[Pete]

it will be the way the world is going. this was different taking me away into a flamed reality ... :)

[Gee]

This very much the case as the sun sets becoming intermittently hidden behind the last of the days clouds.
Very descriptive, can't help you with the title though :)