Water Magic

This is tonight's mood I guess... not sure what that says about me

I wrote us

on the glass of the shower

the water hot

on my bare skin

And the words cried

Little droplets 

coalesced by my witchcraft

and sorcery

Little condensing bundles 

of water magic

that carry away the words 

of my wish

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Daz]

This is so different. I like it a lot.

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Sensual sorrowful vibration is there in the poem..... So much wish was made and washed away daily..... Nicely written

[Chris Shaw]

Visual and I pictured you writing your names on the steamy shower wall. All those wishes disappearing down the drain. There was sadness here and I felt it. Nicely composed.

Chris

[jennifer little]

great write keep up the good work

[David Klay]

A fantastic write! It reads sad, wishful and a bit lonely. You have a strong style and frankly it is a clever read.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it speaks of fantasy...and some wishes do come true...
maybe at the same time he is in his shower...and guess what?
the words are appearing on his glass....
and the heat of love...allows those words to appear.
sensual write,
j.