Scream

Ehh

“It’s like you’re screaming

and no one can hear”

but anyone

can read it…

anonymity.

Just another

scream

on paper

Author's Note

Opening quote from "We Found Love" by Rihanna.
Feedback? anything helps

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

the shortness of the lines are very effective and you measure the tone and flow well.

We do read and somewhat remain anonymous. I see and feel a lot in most pieces I read and the screams never go unheard.

[child of God]

Very deep so little yet so much power it was a plesure to read

[Jamie]

Short and powerful, Good work.

[rashu]

that's really true ..
beautiful work.
although its short but has a deep meaning ..
keep it up

[Chris]

Is there anonymity in being a reader? I wonder.

As for "screams" - rage, hurt... life, even a simple breath can be a scream.

[...]

YOU KNOW PEOPLE SOMETIMES SCREAM LIKE ANIMALS EVEN NO ONE HEAR IT . PAVEL ZAJICEK CZECH UNDERGROUND POET.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

GREAT JOB! Its so true. Anyone can read it... i love that part.
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Dillon "Gerald" Steele]

This poem is so short, yet, it has so much to offer from it. It makes you think about which is more powerful a scream that can be physically heard or a scream on paper where screams aren't loud enough. Fantastic job.

[xhannyx]

I really liked this! (: Beautiful poem

[Rocky Morgan]

Be surprised who is hearing those screams:)