Scars

Scars

A Poem by Green
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People say scars are bad...

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People say scars are bad.
But I disagree.
My scars tell stories,
and contain memories
that I do not want to lose.
Sure,
some of them are sad stories,
like surgery scars
and cat scratches.
But others,
others are joyous
like scars from tripping,
as you run to hug your best friend.

© 2014 Green


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O, I can relate to your poem's theme: I have a small, inch long scar on my forearm which I'm glad is there as it reminds me that as a young man I came terribly close to losing my mind, my life, and my soul-- but for, as they say, the grace of God.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Just oodles and oodles of loveliness! This poems is truly like a warm kitten when its cold outside :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the end of the poem, it made me smile. Awesome job!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think I need to catalogue all of mine ( : O ) but you're right.....each scar comes with a memory....usually of some adventure or a reminder of just how clumsy you can be. thanks for the memories.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice way of looking at things not all scars are bad :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Now that is a profound write. I am glad you realize the truth in this
A life spent cowering from pain will leave you so aching inside The gift you'd miss from lifes sweet kiss knowing you never even tried.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful and I loved the simplicity because with this poem that was what truly made me feel connected to the point you were making. :) i love it

Posted 10 Years Ago


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The last line is really cute. And i like how you brought happiness to something most people think of as sad.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I like how you brought delight to scars - ute

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Simplicity at it's best. The way you make of everyday experiences is quite good, it was like you were telling a story. Great work! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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