If you knew

Deep inside me

If you only knew

The me who lives inside

The total reject

Loner me

The one who'd rather

Hide from sight

I opened up

Trusting you

And see where that's

Gotten me.

Reviews

[Deidara]

Wow this is amazing. This reminds me of my past. That one girl. I was the shy guy in school, I opened up to her and it was the worst mistake of my life. I don't regret it, it is a part of me. How you managed to capture such a pivotal point in my life, how you managed to sum up such feeling in only 32 words is phenomenal and at such a young age as well. This was a very enjoyable read and it makes me reflect on better times.

[Cara]

nice :)

[WingsToFly]

very nice.

[Lino Rie]

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

[Jem Sagcal]

A beautiful piece that shows the such painful loneliness and the beginning of trust.

[Krista Weiss]

Aww!! Really great poem! I love it! :)

[kimmy]

Great short and to the point of poem. You can feel that you are upset, this is sad, but I am glad you shared this :)

[Persona]

Very simple, short and full of upset. Good job!