Tears

Tears spill on your crown of roses,
All the family brought bright poses.
Wake me up from the scare of you lost,
Don't let me see what you had crossed.

Tears spill on your wooden bed,
Inside it lays your pretty head.
Although I'm young and unaware,
I wish I'd seen that you did care.

Tears spill on your patch of earth,
I have loved you since my birth.
Your in a place that's safe and sound,
It's quite high up and far from ground.

Tears spill on your gravestone here,
Imagine that your spirit is near.
I wish that daddy didn't lie,
That nasty pill that made you die.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very sad. I did like the flow of words and thoughts. You gave some real information in the poem. The reader can feel the sadness and the regret. The ending allowed the reader to feel the disappointment and the truth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you, when it was showed to the school, one girl stopped bullies bullying another. I'm glad that at stopped one life from possibly being ended as I know the bully was getting bad for her!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad the bullying was stopped. Hard for people to defend themselves from heartless people.

[Lexi Jackson]

Yeah I agree but at least that one girl stood up for the other which was very brave of her.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

What a beautiful but also sad poem. My heart breaks when I hear/ read this type of thing. Great write.

Kaze~

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you, I'm happy that you like it :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :)

[Talesha]

This is heartbreaking...I empathize with the emotions.I wish you didn't have to feel that way.Thank you for sharing.You have such mesmerizing talent.God bless you with happiness and strength.

Best wishes,
Talesha

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you very much I'm grateful for your understanding nature. Glad you liked it :)

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

This poem made me cry.............

[Lexi Jackson]

Me too when I wrote it. Thanks for reviewing Jeff ;)

[Scott Metro]

You speak about it..you must be easier about it.

A lovely tribute.
Scott

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you I'm glad you liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

Sorry for the loss. A sad write.

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you it happened a long time ago so I can openly talk about it now and I hope you liked it ;)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).................

[PoetryPenPal]

I'm very sorry for your loss, I loved your poem.

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you it happened thirteen years ago so it's fine but thanks anyway :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This was so beautiful. I understand the pain put into this, so I really could feel the emotions as I read it. Wonderful write! :)

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you for reviewing this I'm glad you like it!

[❤ Maggie ❤]

I did! You are most welcome :)

[Jordan's Back]

My mother died when I was born. I never really got to see her, or meet her. But sometimes in the night when I have a nightmare. I feel her presence. This poem is so relatable to me. and its very touching, and tearful!

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you I actually wrote this about my mum. I'm glad you liked it :)

[Raymond Federle]

Emotional and sad. Brill and well done.

[Lexi Jackson]

Thank you very much, I found out today it will actually be shown in a assembly to the rest if my school :)

[Raymond Federle]

Best of Brit to ya.