A Sneaking Suspicion

Ever had a guy like you? Ever wish he would stop?

You are so inconspicuous,

Standing in an army guy's

Camouflaged jacket

As you press your back against

A bright white wall.

No one would ever know you were there -

Not one of the thirty people who sit

Directly in front of you.

Your silent, depressing face

Doesn't drag any attention to you -

Not at all.

Nor would anyone notice you

Inching your way into my view

And attempting to play the song I used to play

On the piano all the time.

And then when you finish butchering that,

You would play the songs we'd sing,

Fiddle with the pendant 'round your neck -

A copy of the one I'd bought myself -

And stare at me.

But no one notices;

You're just so incredibly sneaky

When you turn one-hundred and eighty degrees in your seat

To watch me from up close.

You are totally inconspicuous

When you all-out stare.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think this means. I want to see if I portrayed this well enough.

Open to any and all suggestions.

Reviews

[Leigh]

He's inconspicuous, but you notice him, right? you notice him because he is annoying you? but he is waring you down and you are beginning to like him? I cant actually tell its a bit of a contradiction~~ Or is this how it works, forgive me I'm just a guy. Great write though love your style

[Green Regol]

Yes. Loaded with sarcasm.

[justbreathe]

sarcasm?

[Q.Kennedy]

Pretty much... I love this.
It was a really good read.



Dear kid,
Your desperation depresses me.