Knee Freckles

dear M,

 

            you’ve ruined so many things for me. you’ve ruined my favorite shows, my favorite songs, my favorite foods. I feel sick every time that I pass by that gas station that we got stuck in because it started storming over the summer. I’m putting the Snoopy stuffed animal that you gave me when we were twelve on your car today. I hope it hurts you.

            you know that you won’t find me in her, right? you said you loved it when I would laugh so hard that I snorted. she isn’t as funny as me"she also does not snort no matter how hard she laughs. she does not have freckles on her knees"and yes, I remember when you counted them that night you told me that you loved me"and she never will. she may be your lover, but she will never be your best friend. 

I hope you think of me when you kiss her, 

B 

Reviews

[Serendipity Planet]

Wow I really love that one
I am searching all the time for that type of writing
I love it!

[Kai Edmund]

One day he will realize what he lost and it'll hurt him more than he could ever imagine. You on the other hand, will find that they aren't needed. You will blossom and find happiness and they'll never be able to take that from you.

[Tai Ryens]

Heartbreak is a b***h, but the ex is a bigger one, but the full scope of what he's done will hit hard when he realizes the impulses that he's been chasing are wrong.

As they say, the best revenge is apathy.

Well done.