As someone, who is currently walking the journey of self-discovery and self-identity, it can be a tough road to travel. Especially, when you go against the grain, which society expects from you. Love, your last stanza, because people only pay lip service. Never expecting to hear the truth from one's lips.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you for the review.... I don't often write poetry .... ... but do often "go against the grain.. read moreThank you for the review.... I don't often write poetry .... ... but do often "go against the grain"...LOL
I think most of us long to know the inner workings of others. I really enjoyed this.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you ... I sometimes feel the need to explain who I am as a way of explaining what I write ... .. read moreThank you ... I sometimes feel the need to explain who I am as a way of explaining what I write ... if that makes any sense? ...
11 Years Ago
It makes perfect sense. What comes out of us in creative form is shaped in some way by our experienc.. read moreIt makes perfect sense. What comes out of us in creative form is shaped in some way by our experiences and preferences. And that is in essence who we are...at least to some degree. :-)
I think this is a question many men and woman ask into the night... The question is really do you want to know who is buried deep inside. That is the only question that matters here...
We are so many things to so many different people, ever flowing and uniquely you. Sam's right, love yourself first and others will if they have any sense.
I think it's very difficult to define ourselves. We can say we're this or that, and then find out others see us entirely different. I'm wondering if it even matters, as long as we feel okay about ourselves.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
It most likely doesn't really matter Sam, but sometimes , most times actually, lol, I feel like an i.. read moreIt most likely doesn't really matter Sam, but sometimes , most times actually, lol, I feel like an impostor, showing the world one person while guarding the lost soul within...
11 Years Ago
I don't sense that in your work. What I see there is someone who lays everything out, warts and all... read moreI don't sense that in your work. What I see there is someone who lays everything out, warts and all.
I'm a man, period.
Jokes apart, the question you pose is one whose answer takes a life time to find...
We as humans have a tendency to know each other very well but we ourselves are so different from what we assume.... No one really knows who we actually are....
Nice poem... Thanks for sharing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you for your insightful comments...making me think more ...(s)
...Meanwhile back in Canada...near Niagara Falls, Ontario.............. (<-------------¯_(ツ)_/¯ wavin'), Canada
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Ms Daniels, (AKA - GrayWitch) is an Environmental and Social Activist, Communications Consultant to local and provincial governments, and former Nurse. She has studied Sociology, Criminology and Devia.. more..