Cold Feet!

Haiku or Senryu?

ABOUT GRAYWITCH  Environmental and Social Activist, former Nurse. Studied Sociology Criminology and Deviance. Great Uncles famous authors: Lovat Dickson (Author of Grey Owl books) and Gordon Dickson (ScFi). Always wanted to write fiction and now trying my hand at it - more... Portfolio | Become A Fan Getting old I am  Anticipating winter  Looking for my socks!

Reviews

[Bramptonian]

As a fellow Canadian, I completely empathize and I loved its simplicity.

[David Scott]

Yes dear Gray. We must get those socks. Your feet should not keep you from moving your head forward even now...;-)
Be well.

[Gray Witch]

Again...thank you

[quinfinn]

okay, saw this and loved it. short, sweet and to the point. not a big fan of stories but i will gladly read any poetry you put on here.

[Cryingkate]

Geez I wonder if I will find time to read all of this posting :-) LOL

Cute

[Gray Witch]

Just a chain of consciousness... neither Haiku nor Senyru but maybe a mixture of both ...Hai- yru

Unfortunately I find I am not a poet ...

[Chris]

"Hint..."

Senyru - for people;
Haiku is one for nature
- and this? Not a clue.

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I liked the "alternative" thoughts this one brought to mind.

[DrD]

I know the feeling and enjoyed this one.

[Mic]

A senryu for me, but the rules have changed and could easily be considered either. Reflection, the season, humor... I like it! Very well done!