How do you describe a sexy vampire (promptd by Rosie on Yahoo Gender Studies)

How do you describe a sexy vampire (promptd by Rosie on Yahoo Gender Studies)

A Story by The Grappler
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argh - 'tis but a snippet of nonsense for yer table, me lo'ds and ledies!

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As she floated - for no other term could describe the way she moved without apparent weight or even much more apparent movement than a small flicker of her long flowing black dress - across the room towards me, I could only give no more than ten percent - even less - to that movement in any case - for my whole mind and soul were somehow trapped within her wondrous, lustrous face glowing like the light of the moon at harvest, topped by that luscious, flowing midnight velvet hair that fell forever away from her deep violet and somehow ensnaring eyes and red lips that drew me to them like a whirlpool draws doomed sailors.  Unable to take my eyes from her - even almost unable to move as she drew nearer and nearer - I could only sit and stare like a rabbit trapped in the sharp-pointed glow of the hunter's torch, such was her power to move her self within her corporeal body and move my self within me at the same time....

 

What could I do?  What could any man do?  I forced myself to wake from this dream of an Arcadian Heaven laced with Valhalla and flowing streams of wondrous women pouring like silver sunlight on an Olympian fountain - and fled, near mindless, into the screaming night - a night that screamed more deeply and endlessly for my leaving of her and echoed in the halls of forever within me to generations yet unborn  - yet that screaming no more than my very soul screamed at being so untimely ripped from that which it most demanded of me.... for its very life..

 

She… All Women That Are and Ever Were and Ever Will Be... the Vampyre Woman… Rosie….Rosie….oh, Rosie!

© 2012 The Grappler


Author's Note

The Grappler
I await your responses with bated breath - a breath sucked empty by Ye Vampyre Rosie.... in Ye Towne of Proxy, begod!

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Yah..yah - she's a classic vampyre - but you'd be hard put to tell it were so..wait for the Resurrected Rosie..first fdraft was ball-less....

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it, I wanna know more about the woman, is she a classic vampire? One of your onw creation. What part does the man play? Is he desperately in love with a woman he coukd never possess or what? Tell me!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aaaaaagh! This has now become a short story! A lady friend with the middle name Rose is looking it over! Aaagghhh!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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The Grappler
The Grappler

Forster, Mid North Coast NSW, Australia



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I am a 69 year old with a gift for words - and I write many things, including some rather oddball political theories. more..

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