Sphere of Truth

Found this while digging through my old work. Not my best but not my worst.

Behold the sphere of truth
And we who dwell inside,
Who blindly mine in crooked lines
Behind our chosen guides.

Toward the core some lonely few.
Toward the rim some others.
Some camps scatter throughout the quadrants
With likeminded brothers.

Me? I dig alone and fast
Far off the beaten track.
Whither I go I do not know,
But now there’s no way back.

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

Not shabby at all. In fact it’s charm has stood the test of time and may continue to do so! Minecraft poetry lovers might even take a shine to this. Imo.👍🏻🙏🏻

[Grant]

Appreciate the feedback sincerely. Thanks for visiting my page.

[John the Baptist]

Excellent rhyming and imagery in this one. All have their personal truths, and fancy them to be THE truth. In many ways, it is better to stay off the beaten track and conduct one's own search.

[Grant]

Thank you John. Very kind as always