Keep Hope

The Hope VS Disbelief

The Hope
the thinning light in the dark tunnel
the need not the want
believed by some, forgotten by many
the key to a new beginning.
The Disbelief
the darkness in the tunnel
the want not the need
known by many, forgotten by few
the key to bringing fear.
The Choice
the game changer
the needs and wants
given to all
taken lightly and seriously.

Author's Note

Just a random poem, not my best nor worst.

Reviews

[Stormie Sky]

This poem is good.

[Michael Stevens]

You say it's not your best work, but I think it's excellent; doesn't my opinion count at all?

[Sarah Redigan]

Deep so much expression and strength in so little words ... very powerful

[Jon Roggie]

You have hit on three major points. As your conclusion states, "the game changer".
You chose to write. Well done.

[dunnia]

Loved it

[Carolann Dowsett]

I like this its rather profound with good insight. Nice work

[Anna]

I really enjoyed reading this, I love the structure and transition from one to the next! And the rhymes put a flowing effect to it. I really like it!

[kelvin]

The darkness in the tunnel to want not to need known and forgotten by many these are word one can think on in many outlooks nice shortly written read here thanks for sharing as always keep writing fellow writer

[Joshua J. Lowe]

I liked this, Grant. It's simple, yet conveys deep concepts in its short lines. Well-written.

[Midah]

Nice display of free will (no pun intended) ;) Especially liked how you contrasted
the need for hope with the want/desire for disbelief, a curious trusim.