Rain

       drop

 

 

 

Rain                           drop                

       Rain

       drop                  Rain

 

It's raining today....welcome rain.

Children splashing in the rain...joyful..happy..running

Jumping..

 

Gleeful shouts as they see...

their little faces laughing back from puddles of

rain..

 

Laughter and giggles surround..

as they see their faces ripple around

in the puddles of rain

 

Sweet, wonderful welcome rain.

Author's Note

After a l o n g time away from words...I find myself loving the process again!!

Reviews

[Theresa Anne]

Welcome back to the words. This piece is so happy and playful. It brought a smile to my face. I can just see the children splashing about. Nice job. The style in which it is written is different and I enjoyed it very much. Hope to see more.

[Wanda S. Paryla]

Excellent imagery! Awesome description of the childrens' actions here. You absolutely captured it! - the imaginative and inquiring minds of the innocent, and you did it in so few words. Fabulous!

[Loribeth215]

This is lovely. I could imagine the faces of the children playing. Excellent.