No One Knows

No one know when I leave the house
No one knows where I go
No one knows how dangerous this can be
No one knows I'll sit out in the freezing cold
Crying
Shaking
Thinking
No one is there to see me
Alone
With the wind blowing
The sun shinning
And a clear sky
I still cry
And no one knows

Author's Note

Ignore grammar

Reviews

[Shredded Cabbage]

Very well communicated Gracie. Speaks if the human condition to love and be loved. It let's others know they are not alone and so I see great hope in this. It's saying I know what I'm in and I can break the chains and soar with the better angels of our nature :)

[Kittyskittles]

I can relate to this very well. You did a very nice job at expressing the emotion :) .

[Echoes of Eros]

It was so painful to read of this utter loneliness. They say it's even better to be hated than to be completely invisible. And what hurts even more is that your words express the reality of far too many people in society today. xo

[Bare Trees]

Your introspective view captures internal thoughts that are private and sad. Hope the future brings better and more secure nights Gracie.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Beautiful piece. It radiated a sense of solace mixed in with sorrow. I really love you style of writing and I always compliment writers who can accomplish so much in just a few words. Unlike some who ramble on and on and on and still can't get to the point.
My favourite line is, "No one knows hoe dangerous this can be."
Job well done. Keep up the good work and may you continue to be inspired.

[DoormanDan]

This is a very sad and beautifully written out poem. It flows wonderfully, and has strong emotional appeal. Keep up the good work! :)