Dear child of mine

Dedicated to my teenager son.

Looking at you I see

the bright colours of your Being.

And by seeing...

I love you as a part of me.

Emotions stored as old clothes

are demanding to get free.

Let them go in the wind of time, my son.

let them go, let it be...

When the tears gather in your throat,

let the river flow, my dear.

It will wash all those stories away,

leaving you liberated, without fear.

Remeber at all times, dear child,

you are loved beyond your comprehension

By me, by God, by the Universe...

hold on on that wonderful perception.

Reviews

I love your writes, I can recognize many in it, it's because maybe you're living in the Netherlands, and the education you give your precious son, makes me think of my own. "Leaving you liberated, without fear" beautiful. Lovely ending as well.

Thank you dear Shandra,

E.L.

[zainul]

I love your passionate piece,Shandra.
It rings in the ear and heart and transforms into an unending prayer.
The simple worded poem is an epic in meaning and a great memento for all who have similar experience in life.

[Shandra Sun]

Thank you so much Zainul for your kind remaks. I apologyze that it took so long to give you feedback. I just seem not to find the time to do all the things i wish. Thanks again Zainul. Shandra Sun

[zainul]

You are welcome Shandra Sun .
Thanks for your nice words.
We have to do our works full time while literature is our casual or part time engagement.
Never mind for the delay.

[Shandra Sun]

Yes, that's exactly that Zainul. Thank you for your understanding.

[zainul]

It is my pleasure

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Oh my , this is so beautiful x

[Shandra Sun]

Dear Poet,
YOU are beautiful. Í'm sorry I'm not often around. Life is giving me a lot to do. I'll remember your words. Thank you.
Chandra Sun