A world

January 17 1896

Is there really a world outside of our own? Or are we all over thinking it? Maybe a little bit of both but when it comes down to the facts who really cares.. There is truly something that compels me to think about it so this is just nothing but jibber-jabber or simply just pure Brilliance. Call me crazy here in 1896 writing to my future self as I am about to time travel to a far far time, indeed a time far beyond my own. Will I see flying cars, metal people serving us tea or maybe technology far above our or may I say my wildest dreams. Matter in fact I've been called crazy all my life in my dreams will I prove them wrong..

Author's Note

This is just a sample and I didn't feel like editing or cutting so please ignore and let me know what you think so far.

Reviews

[OctaBrain]

Before you write something about the turn of the century, you should do yourself a favor an look up stuff from that time period. Since you're talking a lot about "flying cars" and "metal people", you may want to look up newspaper ads from that time period and see what kinds of words they used. People wouldn't have used the word "cars" or "technology".
Also.. i see you are saying that this is just a a sample, but that last line really needs to be fixed. Are you saying that people call you crazy in your dreams? Or are you saying that in your dreams you will prove them wrong? Either way, it makes it sound like your character is crazy.