Forgiveness

Your memories are still virginal.
Still my skull is heavy with your gambol.
But I'll not forgive you,
For all the fake promises and love emojis
Instead of residing in my life,
Breathing in my poetries..

Still I remember your giggles
And the goosebumps I felt
When you moved your fingers
Up and down my chest.
You were considered as a bird
And my heart, your nest.
But I'll not forgive you,
Bcoz I even remember,
That night of November.
I was waiting out,
When the freezing air was so loud.
Just to surprise with your b'day gift
But you were having other fish to fry,
With your so called friend,
In your so- called night shift..

I'll not forgive you,
For not replying my calls.
For removing my pictures from your walls
For blocking me from the social sites
And letting others to take your scrap bites

But for my own sake,
The day I may fail to recall you,
The day I may forgive you.
And once again the nights will be
No longer uncomfortable,
And the bright blue sky will again
Continue to be immeasurable...

Author's Note

Having other things to fry:- to have other important and interesting to do or to attend..
Gambol :- the act of running and jumping happily..

Please give Ur honest review...tq

Reviews

[AllenS]

Tough event to forgive. You are right though, sometimes it is important for our own good. Nicely conceived!

[Govind singh]

Thank you so mch sir... I'm glad you enjoyed..

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Broken promises, broken love, broken spirits unashamedly tossed about with a mischievous smile on the offenders lips! The poetic sharing of the hurt and pain experienced was both poignant and identifiable to the reader. And, the conclusion: only time will heal (and perhaps forgive) was particularly effective … :-)

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch sir for Ur sch a precious tym and beautiful words..I'm glad u enjoyed it..

[Himanshu]

The day I may fail to recall you,
The day I may forgive you.
These lines are heart touching dude.... I really enjoyed the way you describe the tale.....

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch jigre...love you😍

[Malvika]

You were considered a bird and my heart nest
I love this line.
Overall I loved the way you told the tale.
And its a beautiful piece. :)

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch mallishka...Ur comments encourages me...thnks a lot..and I'm so glad u loved it..hugs

[Malvika]

I am glad ;)

[barleygirl]

My favorite aspect of your poem is the way you SHOW instead of TELL, with a ton of originality. It's surprising, the way you describe forgiveness, & I love the unique details you choose to describe this ongoing healing process. It's like we are watching the healing happen, from the start & going to the end. You use familiar details, but you state things in unusual ways, which makes your poetry sing. You say in your profile that you're proud to be an Indian . . . well, I love hearing about other cultures, so please feel free to write something to share some aspects of your life in India. I've now reviewed everything you have posted here, so I urge you to write & post more! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Govind singh]

Thnk u so mch Margie..u really like it??...I'll surely write on my beautiful land and once again thanks for guiding..(love)