Poem six.

Poem six.

A Chapter by Mimi

It felt like a wonderland

As we stood hand in hand,

She whispers "Do you love me?"

He kisses her nose, "Forever and always."



© 2010 Mimi


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Its very cute and whimsical. It is a bit short you might think of expanding on this. It has a sweetness to its shortness as though his love is just so simple.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on April 14, 2010
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