Love+BreakUp=Heartache

I love you

I really do

And I wish that you could see

Just how much you mean to me

You know that I want you

I don't know how many times I have to tell you I do

You're a piece of crap you say, but you're not to me

Because your perfect qualities are all I see

I don't know why I try

All I ever do is cry

I love you more than words could say

And all you ever do is look the other way

You act ashamed; you act oblivious

My love, you act like it's me you never miss

I know I can't have you back, that's such a shame

And it hurts knowing we could never be the same

But we can try, can we not

It's not like this battle has never been fought

We must try, we fight

We must not give in to this dreadful plight

I know you love her, but can't you just try

It's not easy for me to let our love die

I don't think I can, I don't think I will

Together we must climb this steep hill

I want to be with you

I want you to be mine through and through

I'm not asking you to break her apart

No, all I'm asking for is a spot in your heart

So please, just bare with me

Because, as you know, I won't give up easily.

Author's Note

I was talking to a very close friend of mine, and most of this is what I actually said to him..I don't really care if you hate it..if you don't..well..thanks..I guess..

Reviews

[The Last Poetic King]

It is very good, though I could picture one of my ex's saying this to me. Though I have grown more cold hearted over the years, I spill it through poems. Which I think you might eventually start doing if you dont already.
Very well written, I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Mimi,

This is always painful. When a love leaves, what do you do? You don't want it to end and there is nothing that you can do. You ask for a space in his heart. He probably has one for you and always will. But he can't show that now, not with another love. Yep, there is definitely those feelings of emptiness.

Best regards,

Rick

[Dream Catcher]

This sounds whats going on with me right now.. =/
But you captured this image very well, the feeling is content in this and packaged up. Its almost like you reached into your emotions and put them in a jar (:
But very good!

[Thomas Fleet]

I really like it. So heartfelt. I hope things get better with you, and no matter what happens, you can make it through. Just keep your head up. :)
Thanks for sharing.

[Huggy Bear]

This is another powerful emotional piece. Well done:)