One last chance.

I got bored and wrote this in three minutes..enjoy..

There is an empty cavity where it used to be,

And in an instant it did flee.

It was filled with hapiness and relief,

But now it's consumed with pain-filled grief;

Nothing will ever heal me.

I am forever lost in a lonesome sea,

And whenever I find a new boyfriend,

I am always shocked at how quickly it does end.

I just want someone to hold,

Someone to be there with me till I'm old.

I want a guy that can make me smile,

Or one that kisses me passionately once in a while.

One who won't go back on his word.

A guy that can speak words I have never heard,

Someone for the cause of butterflies in my tummy that go flying.

Why haven't I had my "happy ending"?

I wish my life was a bunch of horrible dreams.

My thoughts; they are bursting at the seams.

I just want one more hug; one more dance.

One last kiss...one last chance...

Author's Note

-sighs sadly-..I want a boyfriend so bad..

Reviews

[Fergiggledoodle]

This is a fantastic poem, very well written with excellent flow. Everyone has something they want and for you it seems you want someone to be with and to have with you. Relationships come and go you don't need to make it your search, just wait and one day a guy will come into your life that makes you happy even when he isn't there. I give your poem 10/10 keep writing you are really good.=D

[Huggy Bear]

Your poem is really good and I am more impress that it took you three minutes to create. Never rush love, if you do you leave your heart to be broken in many pieces. Enjoy life and before you know your soul-mate will pop in:)

[Ellen Hammond]

Beautiful poem with a nice rhyme and flow. I have spent my life hoping for similar things. But, I finally found that first we have to learn to love ourself and be content with our own company, before we are able to find or hold onto a partner. Keep writing! You are become a really good poet.

[cheeeeese]

Wonderful poem, filled with sadness, but I found beauty in it. Really great piece. Hang in there :)

[Wunderlich]

Very nice flow with very strong opening and closing lines. Don't rush the boyfriend search. And good luck =D

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Mimi,

A fabulous poem. One way or another, this is what we all want. It takes time to find this, however. Some never find this. But don't despair. You are still so young.

Yes, this is a desperate need. It is a desparate need we all have. Give it time. You will find someone. Life isn't easy. There are bumps. You've had your share already. There will be more. Hopefully you've had the big bumps already. You've gone through some beauties. So hang in there.

But the poetry is beautiful. You have a poetic heart. Keep writing and never give up. Very high marks on this one!

My best regards,

Rick

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. Life is a fair journey. We must learn and become better. Your description and story was very good. Good things take time and luck. A good and strong heart will find the person to set a life on fire one day. A excellent poem.
Coyote