I walk down an empty street. I have no shoes upon my feet, My clothes are old and ragged, My hair is snarled and matted, I have nowhere to stay On this dark and oh so lonely day. I don't like this one bit, But maybe I deserved it. I walk back home with too many thoughts Here is my house, a cardboard box. It rains, so I find a store a block away.
I passed a kid on her bike on the way I pull on doors, and in place they stay. A find a sign that reads "Closed for the holiday" I sit alone by the front door. My house in ruins as rain begins to pour. I curl up tightly in a ball on the ground I fall asleep to a peaceful sound It's rain's soft patter from the grey sky And it wets the where I lay. Broken, I cry.
This is so sad, when reading it all I could imagine was a homeless person living on the cold street. It's terrible to know that this kind of stuff actually happens especially at christmas. I can really read into your emotions on this one - good work
This was such a sad read and it is so unfortunate that this stems from real-life issues.I am very sorry you had to deal with such an unfortunate situation. Thank you for sharing, it well written and full of emotion and anguish. I hope getting this out really helped you I hope you doing much better now. Good write.
Man. Sorry about getting kicked out. Hope it doesn't happen. Really strong write about what is a reality for many. Nice work. "Closed for the Holiday" sign is an excellent metaphor for the blind eye we turn towards the homeless.
This is a very emotion piece. I love the imagery in it. I feel you on getting kicked out. I was so incredibly close, and I would've been absolutely fucked if it had happened. A very strong poem. Great job.
A sad and powerful poem. I hope your situation is better then this poem. Description and story is very sad. Sometime we can change our situation by re-evaluation how we treat each other.
Coyote
Amazing work of art...expression of the heart, especially through fear, hurt, or disgust...make some of the best work. Excellent job...no matter what, don't ever give up writing...
Amazing write Mimi. I myself as a poet (uh) can really feel the emotion and see the thought that was put in this poem. This is by far one of your best. It told a sad story with great description, it had a very raw emotion throught the whole thing, and last it had some of the best flow I have seen by you. GReat job.
XOXO
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