A tender, loving night.

a raIny day, and a cold night,

this is the day you hold me close and keep me Warm.

tell me you need to hold me tIght.

tell me you’ll keep me away from harm.

lay me down So sweetly,

tell me i’m your wisH come true,

make love to me slowlY,

then lOok me in the eyes and tell me i’m the only one for you.

let’s play aroUnd noW, and makE each other hot.

take ouR minds on a journEy and make our tHoughts a blur.

kiss my body from hEad to toe and back again without missing a spot.

you’ll do this until my body heat RisEs like a rollercoaster.

lick me, kiss me, ruB me, tease me, do what You want to My body as long as it’s plEasing.

it alwayS seems yOu know how to make my body soar.

we’ll do what we want to each other; we are each others for seIzing.

we’ll make eaCh other climAx like Never before.

hold me in another one of your warm embraceS,

while we snuggle when we Are done.

then we’ll lie there with a smile on our faces,

 knowing that was onlY round one.

I peer up at you to Lick and nip yOur ear.

as the blood in our Veins cool and our heart bEats steadY.

i lOok Up at you, and you look Back, your gAze taking away my fear.

you grin Back and ask, ‘Are You ready?’

Author's Note

This version was inspired by one of my closests friends to whom I telling everything, and I thank him for all that he has done. The red letters spell out " I wish you were here by me so I can say 'I love you baby' "

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Jamie,

I like it. I like the style, and especially the abab rhyme style. A wonderful poem and the spelling of the internal message is a nice touch as well. This is quite creative. What other things can you stretch your mind to reach? This almost feels to me like the opening of a new door for you.

Very well done!

Best regards,

Rick

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. Emotion and tenderness of passion and love in written strongly in your words. You can write a poem of love and desire. You do amaze me. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I like the subliminal message here..lol. This poem has a warm cozy feeling to it. I like the feeling of bonding in a sincere way. Its nice to have and be able to share feelings such as these.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful, I really enjoyed this one alot
This is beautiful and so very expressive.
Well written.

[Domo]

talk about sex. lol
No this was a warming poem. With all anti-maturity aside, this is a very good poem, and very tender. Great wite, and keep up the good writes! ☺
~D♥m♥~

[Twilight]

This was nice to read, Jamie. Warm and tender words, with some sincerity! Erotic, creative, but not crude or profane. It may be worth changing the title, I must admit. The title sounds a little, confrontational? Other than that, pretty good writing!

[J.R Schlievert]

hart warming! i like this poem! another example of emotion=great poetry!