My sweet baby.

If you ever left me I know I'd go insane.
I know my heart would never mend with all that heart-wrenching pain.
Till I meet you I cannot truly see.
A ll I want right now is for you to hold me.
I want to feel your lips pressed tenderly to mine.
I want our bodies to intertwine.
I wish you were standing right before my eyes.
I want to feel you in between my thighs.
I'd love to have us grow old together.
We'll belong to eachother forever.
I hope you know how much you mean to me.
You've completed me, even though when you found me I was like a hollow shell. Alone and empty.
With love like ours, so strong,
It makes me think nothing can ever go wrong.
Why are you so far away? This just isn't fair.
I just want to hold you, like your my little teddy bear.
I tell the truth and that's no lie.
I don't ever want to say 'Goodbye'.
My patience is wearing thin. I canot wait.
I need to be with my soulmate.
In a sad and pleading way,
This is all I have to say;
Please don't ever leave me.
I love you my sweet baby.

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Jaime,

Michael Teal has it right. The thing that strikes me most about your poem is its open and sincere honesty. There are no false flourishes or empty fancy words, just straight talk. And through this straight talk, your longing for your love is desperately apparent. Nicely written.

Best regards,

Rick

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful and full of passion/desire. We need to hold on in the secret of warm and dark room. Love is our best days. And can be the worst days. Description and story was very good. You can write. I would put some of the best poem in the lead on your site. I didn't know to look for more of your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lost, n'MT]

Another good writing piece that I enjoyed. I know firsthand that writing about such powerful emotions and experiences can be just as difficult as experiencing them. It took me years before I was able to share my writings with others and it takes a lot of inner strength to be so honest and open. Good read. (Sorry for the double post, I forgot to rate it.)

[bluessadmood]

This was really nice my friend..I swear..
I swear you have the heart and soul of a poet..I can see it in your words
in those steady rushing feelings,I could see the wonderful images
I read all your works..this one was so nice,but even the others,they told me
and I could see some lovely hidden beauty behind all the words
all true and coming from the heart..I really enjoyed this
I tell you one thing keep writing,never stop..I can see some great talent here..very promising
lovely write

[These Haunted Hallways]

Again, stunningly-romantic piece :) Ur a very romantic writer with a lot of love, i can tell hehe. Im a hopeless romantic, myself lol. This was very beautiful. Beautiful words :)

B.A.

[deeps]

This is such a touching and beuatiful write here.
I like this it's very soft and tender.

[Domo]

How touching. I like the expressing that this poem possessed. This poem is also tender, and is filled with your love. Great job on this one and keep up the good writes! ☺
~D♥m♥~

[Micheal Teal]

Beautiful, Touching, Honest and Original - this is a poem that reaches into the soul.

I am touched by the beauty of your words.

Well Done!