Brrrrrrr....

Tis the Season.

I feel a deep Freeze
From my head to my Toes
My Fingers are raw
I have aches in my Bones
Chills are rising up
From places Unknown
They say Arctic Chill
Is Coming on Home
Is there enough Cocoa
Is there enough Tea
To remedy this freeze
That is inside of Me
The Barometer is Dropping
The Sensations are too
If this keeps on Continuing
I'm Heading for the Flue
Aaaa-Choo !

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

You have a refreshing and remarkable talent, as this unique but very functional poem demonstrates. It flows and oozes depth.

Love it!

[RachelleB]

nicely done, very clever and rhythmic....perfect for here today(Jersey), i think we're down to 12 and dropping...
Thanks for reviewing my poem Descent...

[269]

Yeah, -4 in my home town, but here in savannah 30. Good write & thanks for the review, charly

[Anita B Jacques]

I like it, good finish too, Aaaa-Choo back to you. A cute poem. Well written, good work.