Christmas Wishes

Will two little children get presents from saint nick this year

Sparkling gowns and tinsel is how the christmas grows

 

Rows and rows of flowers and bows all in a line making the christmas fine

 

A jolly man a ' makin toys for the innocent boys and girls

 

Two hopeful children placing two carefully writing letters to old Saint nick

 

Cocoa and cookies on an alabaster tray

 

Waiting near a warm christmas fire till that fine hour

 

 They wait 

             hour

                  after hour

 

til all through the house no ones awake not even a mouse

 

But still no one comes the tree stays bare and empty sadly awaiting for presents to arrive

 

under the tree.

 

The sun slowly inches up into the sky ever so slowly for that one llittle house.

 

Then  theres a thump in the chimney acompanied by a jolly hohoho

 

From the chimney emerges two dirt sodden boots and a big fire truck red bag.

 

The cookies dissapear one by one and the presents appear two bytwo under a  more

 

lively christmas tree

 

As the sun comes up a jolly man enters his sleigh  and yyells " Merry Christmas to one

 

and for all " and as he chuckles he observes " to all a good day ! "

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

ignore spelling mistakes comment pls

Reviews

[Bexfinch]

thank u maria

[Maria]

I Like it

[Luna]

That is cute. the flow is a bit off but the ideas are concrete and it is very cute and imaginative. i like it. good work