lucid dreaming

me practicing lucid dreaming

 

I sighed as Micah wrapped his arms around my petite waist. The feeling was almost over whelming as  my back fell against his chest . The rythm of his breathing and thumping heart echoed through my body. Like electricty dancing on my skin . Outside of the exhibits doors crowds of colorfly clad people  rushed by . Thier murmers growing distant as the past by leaving the space tottaly deserted.I turned around in Micahs arms to look into his dark black  abyss-like eyes  .   " I 've been waiting to this for a long time he said, " I smiled a knowing secret smile and replied "me too," Standing there with Micah at  that specific time felt sooo right. Everything felt like a perfect fairytale. The rustic building. Dim dramatic lights and softly glowing art exhibits . None of Micahs goofy joking around.  I broke free with a sudden urge that tugged on my heart like a mouse attracted  to a juicy peice of cheese . I smoothed out my light blue dress and looked towards the stairs .  I have to get to the water I said confused by the force . "Why, he asked. I dont know I said. It just feels so right like I need too..... I searched for the right word pausing for a second as I bit my lip. I need to discover somthing I said looking up .Hoping my reasoning had been enough. . We walked slowly past the stunningly beautiful displays . His warm hand in mine time seemed to stop .  We walked up the broad stairway my kitty heels clikcking on the stone steps and  opened the glass door. In the room lots of children and adults seemed to be leaving people at least their companions behind jumping . No, diving into the cool spring like water. I gasped and wandered farther into the rooms marble floor towards the pool . I looked at Micah this is the place I smiled eagerly. He shrugged. His eyes drifting away. I could tell thet he felt confused by the sudden change ,angry,upset.  I couldnt stand the tug any longer and I let go lettin gitripp through my body flinging myself into the water. The water arouFor what seemed a couple seconds I slid inro the feeling that felt right cmy legs binding together. A I swam peacfully with the others  . My legs had turned into a long delicate pink shimmering  taile flicking. I waved goodbye and swam away... 

Author's Note

Imm not done i wrote this down this mrning and made myself go to sleep to dream more

Reviews

[Luna]

This is very good. Need to work on some quotation placements and grammatical errors but other than that its good.

[kewlbluetiger]

OOOoo I love it!!! Mermaids rock! I've written a few mermaid stories, but nothing good enough to post! LoL. I love how your mermaid transforms in the end. Good description. It's a draft and it needs work, but I'd keep swimming with this one! ;)

[Bexfinch]

Iknow lots of work i wrote this in l ike ten secs it need lots of descripition pointr on whos talking all that good stuff right? But I need to make it special because it holds who i like.

[:PARAMOREchick]

good but i know u wer just wakin up but it will need work....dont take it seriously