Alternate chapter to chapter 1

Chapter 1

Hannah smirked into the mirror . Today would be the day that her empire would spread out and take over . Like any other person you‘d think that Hannah had human features such as a nose, mouth , eyes ,ears and well a body. Hannah did have these features but she was not human she was one of the most feared hunters in the world. Slowly Hannah pulled her claws through her fine red hair

“ Today is the day,” she assured herself “My plan will work and the princess will be in my hands ,” A thin teen boy opened the door and laughed . “ You still think you are going to be able to capture the princess right away ,” Shaking his head he said the princess has many allies among the lampires ,vampires , Mayans, humans, shape shifters ,and even some were wolves ,” “She is well protected too with her own natural powers she is very tricky,” The boy smiled as he ticked of his points on his fingers. Infuriated Hannah slipped a silver dagger from her side. Twirling it on her finger tips charging it as she hurled it at him . His disapproval turned into amusement as watched the bullet like dagger surge forward destined to plunge into his heart . A millisecond before it grazed his vest he snatched it. “You couldn’t even kill me what makes you think you can kill the princess?” “I should have been sent to do the job,” “But Mr.Nerrow said family must fix the weak link ,” A phone buzzed . Immediately he checked his pocket for the number. “ Its Mr.Nerrow he murmured,” A middle aged man spoke into the phone . “ Deevion my boy,” said the man . There has been a change in plans . The council in Ohio was recently destroyed by a mob of farmers due to recent disappearances. So Hannah and you are to make the trip to Serinia. Deevion nodded. Tell Hannah welcome to 11^th grade will you he said . Local information says that. The princess is going to Lacrosse junior high. You will pose as Hannah’s twin . The call ended so fast Deevion didn’t have time to protest. Hannah looked over curiously and said what did he say . He said Welcome to junior high said Deevion grimly. Groggily Hannah started to search her drawer for something suitable to wear .

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[:PARAMOREchick]

ariel you rock you should write more see ya in language arts and p.e.

[Bexfinch]

please comment which one you like better . Or should i fix them and incorparatye them.