As We Pass/Once Two Strangers Knew More

Im never a fan of a repeat line. but in this case i felt it was needed but what the hell do I know. Often you see much missed in a seconds chance cheers Gonzo

Two strangers pass both moving in seperate directions.

Eye's tell  the stories and give a glimpse like a windows from a highways view

view apon a cold night's drive.

 

Giving only a view of what seconds can make us belive.

Two eye's meet a vision of a story not worthy of the first

act of play.

 

Perfume apon the wind.

Her scent of jasmine blessed  a stale evenings breeze.

Two strangers pass speaking only a well ment hello

but nothing more.

 

Thoughts as they are give hope in a truely hopeless sense.

Two strangers pass then fade into there live's.

Never to meet again.

 

And with a times movement the moment does all but vanish

from thought.

 

Two strangers passed who once held each other as lover's

of secret with passion's covered in perfect dellusion.

 

This night two seperate directions set the stage of my lives eternal

traggic play.

 

Two strangers passed to give what once  burned so

very deep.

As fools these same two strangers gave it all away. 

Reviews

[Leah]

I must admit and please don't take offense to this but the grammar and spelling mistakes does make it a little difficult for me to appreciate this beautiful writing and its underlying tragedy. I love how the unveiling of a tragic love story had instantly played out on its own.