Giddy in a disturbed focus

In my busy realm where focus thrives,
My thoughts take flight, like buzzing bees’ hives.

Then someone pops in, with a question to throw,
And suddenly, my brain’s lost in a show!

“Hey, did you see that?” they casually ask,
And I’m off on a tangent, a curious task.

“Like jellybeans dancing on top of a cat,
While unicorns juggle and squirrels wear a hat!”

I nod and I smile, but inside I’m a mess,
As I spew out nonsense, creating distress.

“Your shirt’s really purple! Or was it a shoe?
I once saw a llama that painted it blue!”

So, if you find me in my focused delight,
Beware of distractions that spark my weird flight.

I might just start rambling, a silly old fool,
In my busy body, mind, and soul's quirky school!

Author's Note

I hope this brings a smile to your face as it did mine while writing this poem

Reviews

[Tumi]

This poem captures the whimsical chaos of distraction beautifully! Your playful imagery, like “jellybeans dancing” and “unicorns juggle,” adds a light-hearted touch that enhances the theme of losing focus. The rhyme and rhythm are consistent, creating a fun and engaging flow

[Jeyanthi]

Hey sis,
It makes me to remember one thing, I was so much focused in my own thoughts that I forgotten what I was doing.. suddenly my hod pointed at me and asked me why am laughing (indeed I was smiling thinking about what he said before "all come running here " in tamil elarum odi vanga and to me it was like he digusied in grany and run and come and take the candy, I was smiling 😃 at my own joke) and caught red handed.. not only that I was asked why am staring after am questioned ( can't blame the bulge of eyes in realization)... outside I was questioned, gone wrong with laughing and staring.. but not in my head inside (🙂)

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

That’s such a funny story! It sounds like you were in your own little world, lost in your thoughts and your own humor. I love how you connected your experience with the playful imagery of the poem—it really captures that moment of distraction and joy! It’s amazing how our minds can take us on such whimsical journeys, even in the midst of serious moments. Thanks for sharing that laugh with me! 😄

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i enjoyed reading it. i'm not sure if there was a deeper meaning, please let me know if there was, but the playfullness and the jolly ambience it gives off was delightful.

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it! The playful tone was definitely my intention, and I wanted to create a lighthearted vibe. As for deeper meanings, I think the chaos of distraction can reflect our everyday lives—how we sometimes get lost in whimsical thoughts. I appreciate your openness to interpretation! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

[Relic]

It did bring a smile. You have a nice imagination and a good writing style. Dr. Suess would be envious of you. :)

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me! Dr. Seuss had such a magical way with words, but it was inspired by his playful style! so I aimed for a similar lighthearted tone. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem.