The Wobble Effect

When Celestial bodies encircle

The Wobble Effect

when a planet orbits a star

the star wobbles due to gravitational pull

when a woman circles a man

the man wobbles due to lack of stability

she circles and circles

while he spins around getting dizzier

and dizzier with each pass

he thinks he is in control of the situation

she is so nice to let that notion

while she applies her magical confusing potion

and allows him to touch her skin

releasing her pheromones to intoxicate even more

she teases his weakened senses

allowing a soft and gentle kiss upon her lips

the wobble effect is in control

he will spin uncontrollably for the millennium

if he is lucky she will guide him

through his life and make him a whole person

if she decides hes not worth keeping

she will release him back into the wild to spin

searching for the next heavenly body

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[The White Wolf]

LOL :) Bloody Brilliant! Science and Art collide, nicely done!

[Destinyxi]

Haha love this poem. Great job :)

[?]

Well yes...I guess women do have that effect on some men....Catchy title....haha
Wobble effect....A fun and interesting piece Gomer...think you have penned this very well...Thanks

[Ramya]

Hahahhaha....this is so good a poem. Funny and brilliant.
I had that wide smile on my face till the very end. You have written this absolutely well, captured the reader's attention.

Excellent, please keep writing more:)

[Stacey Watts]

I love that the wobble effect. This was a very well written and fun poem. I think of all the poems about the ways of a woman. This one is on top of that list. Great work.